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#1 Jun 10 2007 at 9:30 PM Rating: Excellent
...All about how, my life got flipped, turned upside down.
                  FOOLED YA!


This is a story about Vanadiel, in rhyming form, that I came up with just now out of boredom and need to get out my creative side.

I know it may seem a bit redundant, but I hope you enjoy it anyway. Smiley: laugh

The people of Vana'diel travel the lands great and small,
Even though some evil dudes want to take over it all,
Then there are those who stand against proclaiming,"No way!",
And so these adventurers try as they may,
To get stronger and become more powerful still,
So they might stand proud and say "Check out my Ridill".

The mobs stand back and tremble as the enemy nears,
Magic and swordplay, all of their fears,
Collapsed into a group of followers, believing in truth,
Shouting for a last party, even though it's uncouth,
As the orcs prepare behind their castle walls,
The quadav and gobbies gather at Zvahl's halls,
Paths open up, and flags unfurl,
As the army charges forward, the world's shining pearl,
Of last hope against the oncoming attack,
As the heros prepare, the enemies yell "Fall back!".

And so the dramatic battle did clash,
One might even say it was a monster mash,
Arrows from Rangers, casting a shade,
Warriors and Dark Knights, power of a grenade,
Paladins and Ninjas, protecting the troops,
As Thieves sneak through to the enemy coops,
Black and Red mages blast away at the mobs,
Bards boosting morale, simply doing their jobs,
The Monks and Beastmasters commanding great might,
With Dragoons in the air, jumping out of sight,
Powerful blades of Blue Mage and Samurai unmatched,
While Corsairs laugh, knowing the fight to be mismatched,
Puppetmasters and Summoners command a creative beast,
As the White Mages keep up health, to say the least.

Yet even with all of this girth,
Legions of good still have yet to show their true worth,
More powerful creatures showing up as time goes by,
Adventurers still show up, to beat them on the fly.

To this day Vana'diel lies in an endless cycle,
Land and vegetation trying to recycle,
While war passes over the dome,
Of what both human and creature called home.

Vana'diel's fate lies in your hands...


Edit:Capitalization. Smiley: oyvey

Edited, Jun 11th 2007 6:44am by Maideen
#2 Jun 10 2007 at 10:43 PM Rating: Excellent
Also if anyone has any:
-Errors to report
-Lines to add?
-Suggestions on a new subject for another poem/story

Please message me. Smiley: grin I'm still feeling creative.
#3 Jun 11 2007 at 1:53 AM Rating: Decent
Needs more cowbell.
#4 Jun 11 2007 at 1:57 AM Rating: Good
Needs moar posts
#5 Jun 11 2007 at 3:55 PM Rating: Good
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Needs more cowbell.


Greatness lol i agree
#6 Jun 11 2007 at 4:01 PM Rating: Good
I like it! I'd love to write a serious poem about FFXI instead of all the silly stuff I've done, but I have no flair for the dramatic.

Good work though, rate up!
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