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Holy crap.....
That's gonna be a helluva read.
EDIT: Ok I started to read, and just couldnt get into it at all. It sounds like some teenage girls book. Possibly pre-teen girl.
Edited, Nov 8th 2007 11:47pm by petrifiedmonkey
That's gonna be a helluva read.
EDIT: Ok I started to read, and just couldnt get into it at all. It sounds like some teenage girls book. Possibly pre-teen girl.
Edited, Nov 8th 2007 11:47pm by petrifiedmonkey
Holy wall of text Batman!
Welp *starts reading*
Welp *starts reading*
I started to read it and my eyes were literally crying trying to read it.
Hope your happy, your Story made me cry
Hope your happy, your Story made me cry
lol its supposed to sound like a teenagew girl. lol the story was ment for growth, maybe i should put that in there
working on proper spacing
edit: turns out while in post format it looks different even then, so yeah
Edited, Nov 9th 2007 12:27am by Starilae
edit: turns out while in post format it looks different even then, so yeah
Edited, Nov 9th 2007 12:27am by Starilae
Posting Next part tommorow.
question, should i make the parts shorter?
question, should i make the parts shorter?
Post it on a blog or something else - in parts - then link us to it in the thread. It'd be much easier for your audience.
tl;dr
Try spacing more, reading blocks of text hurts too much. Read: double return between breaks.
Such as this.
And this.
Edited, Nov 9th 2007 1:18am by bsphil
Try spacing more, reading blocks of text hurts too much. Read: double return between breaks.
Such as this.
And this.
Edited, Nov 9th 2007 1:18am by bsphil
His Excellency Aethien wrote:
Almalieque wrote:
If no one debated with me, then I wouldn't post here anymore.
gbaji wrote:
I'm not getting my news from anywhere Joph.
Split it up in segments. Link previous chapters in subsequent posts.
You can also use the [ pre ] [ /pre ] tags to maintain your spacing if that's what you're worried about.
Or make a blog and link it here, whichever works for you.
I may or may not like it, but no way am I finishing that in one sitting, and I'm not interested enough to bookmark and come back to read it all later.
Sorry.
You can also use the [ pre ] [ /pre ] tags to maintain your spacing if that's what you're worried about.
Pre tags let you insert all the spaces
you want Or make a blog and link it here, whichever works for you.
I may or may not like it, but no way am I finishing that in one sitting, and I'm not interested enough to bookmark and come back to read it all later.
Sorry.
Hey anyone got any good blog sites i could list this on?
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